23. Oktober 2013
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My wife was in a bad temper this morning. Maybe it was because I had babbled something, lets say , rather unrefined ;-)
On the commuter train I came up with the idea writing a song with the title "mean streak". I just put down its chorus:
she's got a mean streak
she isn't keen to please
she's got a mean streak
and she likes to tease
she's got a mean streak
she can be pretty crass
she's got a mean streak
a real pain in the ass
she's got a mean streak
and I love her
I wonder how people can have 'writer's block' - something is always going on that plants ideas in your mind, isn't it?
Cheers,
Bernd
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18. Oktober 2013
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08:32
Comments on "who is I" (cool hook line, isn't it?):
I love these spare, meaningful lyrics that milk a lot of meaning out of a few words.
hardtwistmusic
really enjoyed reading this good example of less is more
Tony
love the word marooned!!
good write, love the short verses and chorus!
James
I could write simply to gather praise like that, these guys made my day! Do you wonder what they're talking about? This is it:
once you came crawling
a bitch in heat
craving for my touch
once you loved me
now you don't
have I changed that much?
you tell me
who's this guy
you tell me
who is I
once committed
I am true [ I changed this to: "I STAY true"]
sticking to my words
you making off
just like that
you can bet it hurts
you tell me
who's this girl
you tell me
who is you
I don't think that explanations
could help heal the wound
someday I may come to terms with
having been marooned
maybe while I'm all alone
I'll get to know myself
still I will have to live with
having never known my girl
you tell me
who's this girl
you tell me
who is you
you tell me
who's this guy
you tell me
who is I
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7. Oktober 2013
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I've actually begun tackling my self-imposed mammoth task, compiling, sifting, and editing all lyrics that I've written so far. There are 337 of those. After having already published three collections that may not seem too effortful to do as I'd 'only' have to add sixty -six new lyrics - and that would be that. Unfortunately, though, I seem to have formatted my former collections slightly differently so I'll have to re-format the files before I will be able to sort them and go through them.
At the moment the lyrics are scattered over four MS Word documents that I'm reformatting before I can combine them and sort the lot. Then the tedious work of viewing and editing them all will begin. To my delight, I keep coming across true marvels I didn't know I'd written :-)
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5. Oktober 2013
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10:17
I had got it all wrong! The chorus was the verse and vice versa. Alex and I made or rather re-defined the second part of the verse a pre-chorus - less lines to write ;-) Alex also suggested to swap the lines "where the music plays" and "where the party's on" to get the rhymes closer together (you might note that I had already changed the lines a bit). The pre-chorus now goes:
come on dancing
come on, join the fun
come on dancing
where the party's on
let's go dancing
where the music plays
keep on dancing
turn the nights to days
This is the chorus:
we keep on dancing all through the nights
while we are bathing in blazing lights
we take it easy, we've got it right
'cause we lead our lives under (the) disco light
"Under the disco light" is a much better title than the corny "keep on dancing". I love the line "we lead our live under the disco light". Let it appeal to you, and you'll see that - and why - it's a very typical Harmsen ;-)
I actually expected Alex to reject the second verse - he didn't:
when life
is reset to zero
let's go
where all folks are heroes
Have a great weekend (I'm still cooling my swollen cheek afterr a visti to the dentist, it doesn't hurt, so it's alright.).
Bernd
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4. Oktober 2013
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It's a bore of a title, I'm afraid! I can't tell you how hard it is to write easygoing stuff: let's party, let's have fun... What exactly could you possibly write without repeating the very same bullshit over and over? Excuse my French! Alex has send a tune that he asked me to find fitting words for. The song is supposed to deal with having fun. Full stop! The - rather few - lyrics I've written so far on that very subject don't match.
Here's what I've go so far - a perfect match, by the way, except the word "and" that may be omitted, hence the brackets:
PRE-CHORUS
get up
when darkness is falling
let's go
where bright lights are calling
CHORUS
come on dancing
come on, (and) join the fun
come on dancing
where the music plays
keep on dancing
while the party's on
keep on dancing
while the music plays
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2. Oktober 2013
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I'm the worm in your apple
I'm the sting in your flesh
I'm the flaw in your theory
I'm the hope that is dashed
I'm the leak in your memory
I'm the guilt that you feel
I'm the wound that keeps hurting
I'm the fly in your meal
why don't you try to accept me
as I am
we both are bound to live together
till the end
while you strive to find your paradise
here on earth
I'm making sure you recognize it
once you're there
I'm the luck you are finding
I'm the early morning sun
I'm the friend who you care for
I'm the days full of fun
***
I edited the text on the fly, making all statements singular except "the days full of fun". I also edited the line in the bridge that I was not happy with changing "we both are bound to live together anyway" to ""we both are bound to live together till the end", thus obtaining another half-rhyme in the bridge and making it differ more from the verses. It's pretty short. I could imagine an outro that goes:
I'm the worm in your apple
(I'm the luck you are finding)
I'm the sting in your flesh
(I'm the early morning sun)
I'm the flaw in your theory
(I'm the friend who you care for)
I'm the hope that is dashed
(I'm the days full of fun)
... where the answering lines (in brackets) are sung by a second voice or a choir. It sounds cool to my ear (as always I'm 'hearing' the song while I write it). Maybe KOMIR picks this one...
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1. Oktober 2013
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19:26
... will be the title of my next lyrics. I wrote them during my vacation. I may want to rewrite the bridge. Will post the current version tomorrow.
Stay tuned ;-)
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12. September 2013
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09:22
I wrote the lyrics rather quickly - over the lunch break. There is one line that I want in but didn't quite match the language of the rest of the lyrics:
at an early age
you'd reached the top
you touched the stars
could not be stopped
*** banged many girls ***
basked in your fame
you made the rules
it was your game
The line in question was criticised very much because of the word "bang" - mainly by women ;-) Maybe the British would have preferred "shag"? One suggestion said to replace it with "slept with many girls". But then I came across another comment on a different board where someone criticised not that particular term, but found the "many girls" too corny. So, instead of replacing the vulgar term with a 'decent' one I now tend to make it "screwed all the girls".
This is the chorus:
too high too fast
it could not last
time has come you're falling
too slick, too steep
the fall is deep
in dirt and dust you're crawling
And here is the bridge that so far nobody seemed to understand (one got close):
take my hand if you like
I've waited for you to pass by
be my friend for a while
show me that you can flash a smile
see, I've got some cheap wine
let's have a drink on changing times
I can show you around
could teach you how to hold your ground
A hint to the attentive reader: the "cheap wine" should give you a clue at least to my own interpretation - that need not be the only valid one, mind you.
The lyrics are nothing new or special, EXCEPT the bridge that I'm really proud of.
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5. September 2013
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13:10
... is the next project I'm working on. I'm writing lyrics to match music by Hot Mama from Freiberg near Dresden (check them out - it's sure worth it). The first part had to be matched with the tune, writing the middle part was similar to writing to match chord progressions: just filling the gaps, otherwise I was free. I smuggled in the odd rhyme here and there, however. At the moment we are discussing the outro: we could simply repeat the first two verses with a few added lines or I'd have to rewrite the whole part. There is no chorus or similarly 'conventional' structure in the song. The most conventional part in the song will be my lyrics ;-)
The strongest part with regard to my lyrics is the very beginning:
she holds her child
in her arms
with shaky voice sings her a lullaby
Usually, I'm not good at 'painting images', these few lines paint a strong one!
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4. September 2013
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09:15
that is: compiling, correcting, editing, maybe even rewriting a few of the 333 lyrics that I've written so far. Some will be replaced with rewrites that I've written over the time. A few - the most crappy ones - might be replaced altogether, or - in other words - simply left out. With "am I counting" I've written my 334th text, more will follow, so I can scrap a few older lyrics and still have 333 lyrics in the collection.
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