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18. Oktober 2013 5 18 /10 /Oktober /2013 08:32

Comments on "who is I" (cool hook line, isn't it?):

 

I love these spare, meaningful lyrics that milk a lot of meaning out of a few words.

hardtwistmusic

 

really enjoyed reading this good example of less is more

Tony

 

love the word marooned!!

good write, love the short verses and chorus!

James

 

 

I could write simply to gather praise like that, these guys made my day! Do you wonder what they're talking about? This is it:

 


once you came crawling
a bitch in heat
craving for my touch

once you loved me
now you don't
have I changed that much?

you tell me
who's this guy
you tell me
who is I

once committed
I am true [ I changed this to: "I STAY true"]
sticking to my words

you making off
just like that
you can bet it hurts

you tell me
who's this girl
you tell me
who is you

I don't think that explanations
could help heal the wound
someday I may come to terms with
having been marooned
maybe while I'm all alone
I'll get to know myself
still I will have to live with
having never known my girl

you tell me
who's this girl
you tell me
who is you

you tell me
who's this guy
you tell me
who is I

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