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28. Februar 2014 5 28 /02 /Februar /2014 15:05

I'm writing for two young ladies at the moment, Katharina and Yasmin, both with a decidedly commercial focus. The outcome is undecided, of course: will they accept or reject my lyrics, will they eventually produce the songs, will the songs be published? Whatever the outlook, at this stage my usual "creative commons" licensing is kind of suspended, at least with regard to the lyrics I write for my new partners. The same applies for collaborative lyrics writing: whenever partners are involved the copyright - or rather: licensing - terms are, let's say, undefined. I rewrote Sonya's - that's Hot Mama - song "labyrinth" the other day.

 

In all these cases it is 'writing to match their tunes' or 'music first', as opposed to collaborations where my partners set my lyrics to music. Actually, in such cases no true collaboration is needed since the lyrics already exist. Only working with Craig Pavone is slightly different. Craig picks lyrics from my collections every once in a while, creates music to match their meter and attitude, then we refine lyrics (me) and music (he) iteratively. In the process I also can work on improving my language skills - with regard to American English - since Craig often has suggestions for alternative words or phrases.

 

So, does this mean that I am going commercial? I actually have been commercial all the time, if with rather little success if it comes to money. I only have excluded the non-commercial use of my own stuff on the internet from the contract with my PRO (performing rights organization; actually the German GEMA handles mechanical rights as well). Which means that my own stuff - ** where no other partners are involved ** - can be shared and disseminated over the internet, even within a commercial, ad-financed context like Facebook, Youtube and the like. Private copies and private use outside the internet are legal anyway, at least in Germany. The difference lies in the scope: what you allow to be shared over the internet for free you will hardly be able to sell at the same time.

 

There is a 'hidden agenda' to my approach. My licensing model allows everybody, mainly hobby musicians, to use my lyrics in their own songs. They don't have to ask me. This helps spreading my lyrics. Should every once in a while a performing artist or band pick my lyrics they automatically 'migrate' into the commercial zone - and begin generating royalties. There has not been a hit yet, though, yet a considerable, and ever increasing number of my lyrics is being performed. What that means in terms of money I will be able to tell by the end of April, when the royalties for 2013 are distributed. And of course there is the recognition as a lyricist or songwriter (I'm working on the latter).

 

It's a mystery to me why other lyricists do not adopt my model, yet sit on their lyrics, insisting on keeping complete control over copyright and licensing, and hoping to be discovered by some famous artist some day. Most likely, that way their lyrics are deemed useless. Maybe it's all the better for me - there is little competition ;-)

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21. Februar 2014 5 21 /02 /Februar /2014 10:54

The stuff that I write myself comes with a 'creative commons licence'. That means, I give it away for free as long as it is not used commercially. At the moment, I am co-writing lyrics with Sonya from Hot Mama. At the same time I'm writing for a professional pop singer. Both lyrics must not be shared in my usual manner, so I'm keeping the lid on for the time beeing. Eventually they will occur in a collection, yet outside the CC stuff.

 

Have a nice weekend!

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17. Februar 2014 1 17 /02 /Februar /2014 17:40

Some people hits it lucky. I'm one of those :-)

 

I had prepared two backing tracks that still lacked a vocal line as well as lyrics. A few moments ago I completed the lyrics for one of the tracks. This is the chorus:

 

I still can't believe my luck
that we are still together
our little
harmless love affair
turned into lifelong pleasure

I still can't believe my luck
that you are still my lover
our little
self-made mystery
that's daily rediscovered

 

Yes, I can be romantic at times. My wife says that such moments are far too rare. I haven't shown her the lyrics yet...

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17. Februar 2014 1 17 /02 /Februar /2014 15:27

Just another 'quick one' with a rather obvious word play:

we reach the peak - we've come together

 

At the end I even make it "we're coming together", should someone have missed the clue...

 

Maybe it's not the peak of my lyrics writing, but I'm happy with it:

 

I reach the peak with you
I reach the peak
we reach the peak - that's what we do
we reach the peak

you reach the peak with me
you reach the peak
we reach the peak - we've found the key
we reach the peak

we've gone a long way
now we've come together
we have seen hard days
but now things are fine

...

 

Have a nice day!

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15. Februar 2014 6 15 /02 /Februar /2014 14:44

"That girl got balls" is my video that is most often viewed - only four hundred odd times, mind you, but that's often for the likes of me ;-) And it actually got a few "likes". My own favourite would have been "Come real", but then, I'm biased anyway ...



 
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8. Februar 2014 6 08 /02 /Februar /2014 12:39

One spelling correction (though inaudible): circumcised - and yes, women can be, and are circumcised, actually mutilated.

 

"young, aroused, barbaric men" instead of "..., and brutal men" (always good to get rid of 'ands', 'buts' etc., and 'barbaric' seems somewhat stronger to me than 'brutal').

 

"I'm most women in the world" instead of "like most women in the world". I admit, that it's not correct grammar, yet it expresses more precisely who 'I' in the song actually is. I couldn't make 'I' 'all women' or 'the women', though, since the lyrics' message is not correct for (most) women in the western world.

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3. Februar 2014 1 03 /02 /Februar /2014 18:50

I rewrote the lot and it differs a lot, maybe I can use parts of the planned nonsense-lyrics in some other context. You can find the complete lyrics on my home page. "Diogenes" begins:

 

I live in a barrel
prefer the simple life
your corrupt society's
no goal for which I strive

I don't mind the public
when I relieve myself
you screw up your nose
but it's not me who smells

if you ask me what it is I do
I hold the mirror up to you

 

I actually did use a few of the lines I had before in the next part:

 

I'm living at the low end
I do not go to work
I'm happy and contented

...

 

I have no pretensions
disdain the hypocrits

...

 

But on the whole the original text is hardly recognizable. I simply went where my writing lead me ;-)

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1. Februar 2014 6 01 /02 /Februar /2014 17:46

I put down some lines of text the other day with the intention of writing some nonsense song, a funny and weird song that would be open for different interpretations - or none at all. The memory of "I am the walrus" popped up somewhere in the back of my mind. After "pool of blood" and "claim my right" I thought it was time write something light for a change. "I'm living in a trash bin" was the first line that came to my mind. I went on from there:

 

I'm living in a trash bin
I smell of rotten fruit
I dress kind of casually
I have no use for suits

I'm living at the low end
I don't go to work
I'm happy and contented
wallowing in dirt

I wear a stupid grin
I never went to school
maybe you are superior
and maybe I'm a fool

you scorn and deride me
you don't care who I am
the day that I'm dying
you can have my ham

 

I'm fat, I like to eat
and I know no false shame

 

That I might be writing from the perspective of a pig only came to my mind when I thought about a rhyme for "am". Only later I came up with the idea to put in some reference to Diogenes in the chorus. So I began doing a little research on Diogenes. Well, truth be told, I simply checked Wikipedia, and I put down these lines:

I have no pretensions
don't care for conventions
I disdain hypocrites
call me dog, call me misfit [clumsy rhyme, I'd like to keep the hypocrites in, though ...]

That's what have at the moment. I consider rewriting the lot to make it a song about Diogenes - from his own perspective. I'll have to scrap the "trash bin" then - my very first idea - and make it a barrel.

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25. Januar 2014 6 25 /01 /Januar /2014 17:34

I'll make the laconic verse - "a cleaner wipes the kitchen clean..." - the last one, serving as an outro, and insert an additional verse:


years of anger under lids
burst in a  killing spree
staying together for the kids
who are the casualties

 

And, since I was in writing mode, I also wrote the chorus:

 

drowned, drowned, drowned
in the rising flood
of a cheerless, hate-filled life
drowned, drowned, drowned
in a pool of blood
caused by a raging kitchen knife

 

Quite obviously, these are some of my darker lyrics ;-) I also wrote "claim my right" that was inspired by the organized gang rape in India.

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25. Januar 2014 6 25 /01 /Januar /2014 16:02

I had written, yet not quite finished, three verses.

 

a pool of blood on the kitchen floor
tells a bitter tale
a family that now is no more
a home that is for sale

a row that had gone out of hand
rage suppressed too long
caused a normal fam'ly's end

???

a cleaner wipes the kitchen clean
no traces must be left
the fam'ly's heirs are very keen
to sell the property [doesn't rhyme with "left"]

 

Sometimes you just have to let things rest for a while. I re-read my sketch today, and completed it without any ado:

 

a pool of blood on the kitchen floor
tells a bitter tale
a fam'ly that now is no more
a home that is for sale

a row that had gone out of hand
rage suppressed too long
caused a normal fam'ly's end
lives that had gone wrong

a cleaner wipes the kitchen clean
does her job properly
the fam'ly's heirs are very keen
to sell the property

 

And now for the chorus...

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