I describe my ongoing lyrics writing projects. Where I get my ideas, how I match my words with other people's music, which little helpers I use...
... then Robert suggested to re-write the song so it would only have verses and neither chorus nor a bridge. He re-wrote what I had planned as bridge(s), and also added two verses: This was his first draft: Post It On The Internet If you’re just starting...
Post lesenThis was the first version as I had put it down during a lunch break: when you’re beginning or you are through when you feel strong or you have caught the flu you should post it post it on the net when you are merry when you feel blue when you’re unfaithful...
Post lesenThe chorus for my 'migration song': venture to the promised land to share its overflowing wealth work and prospects with no end as long as you are in good health venture to the promised land At the end of the song the chorus is modified to match with...
Post lesenI've put down verses or pieces of text in the manner I had outlined before: first part: you were marked out for the big venture to go and try your luck travelling over the sea young, healthy, strong you could be the one who once could support the whole...
Post lesenA little 'tweak' in verse no. 3: your looks aren't too great this is just your fate so much as for your skin yet not the girl within (instead of ... "yet not to the person within"). And I've added a bridge: there's a buzzing happy life beyond stardom...
Post lesenThe verses: kids found you uncool you often looked the fool never caught the boys' eyes love seemed to pass you by but you're perfect as you are ... you had no romance you would never dance with no rhythm in your head but two left feet instead but you're...
Post lesenI envision verse lines in the manner of "you weren't good at school / you always looked the fool..." glued together with the refrain, i.e. making it a refrain-type song. The refrain/chorus is all I've got at the moment: you're perfect the way you are...
Post lesenI put down the story outline: 1) an African family decides to send their young, healthy, strong son abroad to make his fortune and maybe will be able to support them in the long run. They pool their funds together to pay the smugglers. 2) together with...
Post lesenThe other day I watched a YouTube video: The truth about the economy While the statements may sound quite convincing, and are indeed identical to what German unionists would say - i.e. that strengthening the inner demand for consumer goods could recover...
Post lesenThree verses: she's been a dutiful daughter for long enough she was eager and well-behaved she was studious at school and never gruff she was kind, if a bit too grave I used RhymeZone.com here (gruff, grave) there's this boy, her senior by a couple years...
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