I describe my ongoing lyrics writing projects. Where I get my ideas, how I match my words with other people's music, which little helpers I use...
A little 'tweak' in verse no. 3:
your looks aren't too great
this is just your fate
so much as for your skin
yet not the girl within
(instead of ... "yet not to the person within").
And I've added a bridge:
there's a buzzing happy life
beyond stardom and careers
there is fulfillment and quite bliss
beyond the spotlights and loud cheers
you need not struggle, fight, or toil
to find love right now and here
I first had put down lines ending with "limelights" and "star" but could not find viable rhymes for them. I then decided to use a rhyme scheme going X A X A ('X' meaning 'no rhyme') which would be much easier to do and also would be sufficiently different from the rhyme schemes I'm using for the verses - A A B B - and the chorus - A A X X.
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