I describe my ongoing lyrics writing projects. Where I get my ideas, how I match my words with other people's music, which little helpers I use...
... awaiting Holger's approval. I wrote another verse that I'll use as first verse: what I think 'bout our last time? I'll tell you quite frankly it wasn't my night that night you'd come too fast again not for the first time you left me unsatisfied And...
Post lesenTwo verses: hasn't been my day today the odds stacked against me all I touched I seemed to break a dressing-down at work it was all shame on me because once more, I was too late ... and you know, I was looked down on I was bedded on roses my life has...
Post lesenMy favorite three-piece blues-rock band has become a four piece band. With Nici they have gained additional femal vocals. This means that more lyrics will have to be written from a female perspective. Holger has sent two new songs that still lack lyrics....
Post lesenThe bridge: I had my fun, oh, that is true now I ask myself if it was worth it I knew I would be losing you now I ask myself if it was worth it I think of what we had and could have yet again Babe, I feel so desperate trying to explain after which the...
Post lesenMy lyrics "wait and see" aren't understood. After writing "let's procratinate", giving the term a positive meaning (take your time), I wrote "wait and see", giving that phrase a negative touch. Which doesn't seem to work. I think, I'll change the lines...
Post lesenI mentioned that there should be no problem inventing any nasty or naughty things that men would do, didn't I? They cheat, and do so repeatedly ;-) The verses: Babe, we had it going on Oh, the time with you was wonderful Babe, I know things have gone...
Post lesenI dropped the word "but". I seemed to need it to match the tune in my mind, but the lyrics should work nicely - and look better - without: "I feel so bad, I come crawling on my knees" Rule: try to omit superfluous words wherever possible. Should additional...
Post lesenI know I failed you, I'll try to put it right I won't talk it down, oh, I don't shun the light but I feel so bad, I come crawling on my knees why does it have to hurt to gain your sympathy ... is supposed to make the chorus. Obviously, the verses will...
Post lesenThe third verse: how many were there before? and what lies did you tell them? did you tell that you would get a divorce? what kind of life did you fake? what did you tell 'bout your past? have you never been stung with remorse? [I checked RhymeZone.com...
Post lesenI've written two verses. Although I checked my Penguin Rhyming Dictionary as well as RhymeZone.com they seemed to be of little help this time, or, more precisely, of none at all. I used dict.cc (my favorite online dictionary) and Google(!) to check expressions:...
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