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I describe my ongoing lyrics writing projects. Where I get my ideas, how I match my words with other people's music, which little helpers I use...

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I won't give in - IV

Following more hints and suggestions from forums I've rewritten verse 2 yet again:

 

you pay the wage, you call the tune
I’m a resource that you consume
while that holds true for working hours
at quitting time you lose your power

 

I also intend to scrap the term 'ideology' replacing it with presumption. That might mean losing a rhyme, yet I would have a stronger and better fitted word in the pre-chorus:

 

you may think you can dictate to me
you may think you can lay down the law
you base your views on presumption
but your theories have got a flaw

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