and yet another MotorPlanet song

Holger seems to be in a creative phase. Must be the new, much acclaimed drummer. The song he sent the other day has become "torn down".

The new one has a similarly uncommon structure, no real chorus as far as I can see - or rather hear. I put down the basic structure as A A B B A A' B B' (A' and B' standing for minor variations - one syllable less or so, as far as I'm concerned). Maybe B or B B can be interpreted as chorus, I'll have to place the hook somewhere.

As he uses to do Holger sings dummy text in his rough cut, so I can easily count syllables and get the stresses right. And the song line has a natural flow right from the beginning.

Syllable counts for A and B are 5, 8, 6, 8, 8, or 5 (or 6), 5, 5, 3, respectively.

As for the subject I have no idea yet. Got to check my scrap book for suitable hook lines.