6. Oktober 2012
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/2012
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I've completed the second verse:
Hey Joy, please stay awhile
you put a smile upon my face
you're always carefree as a kid
you make my life gather pace
First I had "... make me feel carefree as a kid" but I like the second version better that keeps up the ambiguity of the text: "joy" as joy versus "Joy" as a person's name.
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