My lyrics were difficult to sing, so Svein left superfluous words (notes) out - that I had put in originally only to match the tune as closely as possible - or changed the order of words here and there. With one exception he also altered the chorus:
and now I
am standing in the sun
and feel blessed in the garden of mine
like my plants
I revel in the sun
I dance, and I'm feeling so fine
place of rest
isle of love
the world of mine
Garden of Bliss (on SoundClick)
My story of "Garden of Bliss":