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I describe my ongoing lyrics writing projects. Where I get my ideas, how I match my words with other people's music, which little helpers I use...

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trying to make sense: reason to live

These were my first notes:

 

if you know a cause to fight for, then fight
but make sure you look at the things by light
if you know a reason to live, then live
sometimes it's better to take then to give

 

It rhymes okay but doesn't make too much sense, does it? After shifting lines and a little editing the new chorus now reads:

 

if you know a cause to fight for, then fight
if there is no reason to take, then give
if you know a cause to die for, then die
if you know a reason to live, then live

 

Better, isn't it? I titled it "reason to live". I've kept the line "how about looking at things by daylight" in the store, so to speak. But I may not keep it in because it has the same meter as the other lines. Preferably, different parts of a song should have different meters and different rhyming patterns.

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