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I describe my ongoing lyrics writing projects. Where I get my ideas, how I match my words with other people's music, which little helpers I use...

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post it on the internet V

After comparing the different versions and proposals my favorite version would look like this:

 

Post It On The Internet

if you’re just starting
or already through
if you feel good
or you’ve got the flu
just post it
post it on the internet

when you feel happy
or you’ve got the blues
when you’re unfaithful
or when you are true
just post it
post it on the internet

and when your friends ask
what you’ve been up to
just upload a picture
with a comment or two
just post it
post it on the internet

it may be important
and significant
maybe just boring
or irrelevant
just post it
post it on the internet

when you wait for the bus
or you walk the dog
whatever it is
write it down in your blog
just post it
post it on the internet

the things that you hate
the things that you like
the things that you do
in the middle of the night
just post it
post it on the internet

 

 

That would mean going back to the verse - verse - verse structure. One method to prevent this structure from becoming boring could be having two different melodies for the verses, so the structure would actually be A B A B ... instead of A A A A. I did that with "Spartacus" (and "Gilgamesh" as well) and was quite happy with it.

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