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I describe my ongoing lyrics writing projects. Where I get my ideas, how I match my words with other people's music, which little helpers I use...

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no more (II)

My first revision after having access to Rhymezone again which seems to be(come) my favorite tool:

 

no more trusting, no more lying
no more longing, no more crying
no more suff'ring, no more feeling
no more hurting, no more healing
no more hoping, no more waiting
no more loving, no more hating
no more wanting, no more missing
no more nagging, no more hissing

 

no more trying, no more failing
no more smiling, no more wailing
no more falling, no more bleeding
no more eating, no more feeding
no more running, no more walking
no more list'ning, no more talking
no more teaching, no more learning
no more owning, no more yearning

 

no more won'dring, no more caring
no more giving, no more sharing
no more sneaking, no more prancing
no more playing, no more dancing
no more smirking, no more grinning
no more gaining, no more winning
no more hagg'ling, no more dealing
no more taking, no more stealing

 

no more breathing
no more breathing
no more breathing

 

I'm not quite content with the pairs of verbs yet. And I would like to include "cheating" in the first verse, and "cheering" in the last. You see, the basic idea is to move from chliche ("I would like to overcome unhappy feelings") to realization ("I can only get rid of suffering, worrying etc. by dying"). Basically that's the Buddhist concept of life and Nirvana, if slightly more mundane ;-)


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