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I describe my ongoing lyrics writing projects. Where I get my ideas, how I match my words with other people's music, which little helpers I use...

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let's party and get on bad III

Verse one begins with "when the work is done, or when school is out " (note the correction!), so the missing four lines should have something to do with having got rid of disagreeable duties:

 

when the work is done
or when school is out
it's time for some fun
and we sing and shout
no more drudgery
and no foreign rule
no indignity
no more playin' the fool

 

I need a second verse that should add something new to the song. First I thought about writing about partying all over the world in the manner of  "They're really rockin' in Boston, In Pittsburgh, Pa., Deep in the heart of Texas, And round the 'Frisco Bay" (Chuck Berry). But then I got the idea of describing the means of transport you might use when heading towards the venue of the party. It would make a logical progression: first verse - ending the working or school day; second verse - moving towards the venue. The third part, that would be not another verse, but the bridge, might then be about actually dancing and enjoying oneself.

 

Verse two:

 

take the bus or train
come by foot or car
or even come by plane
if it is too far
you can walk or ride
take the motorbike
make small steps or strides
just come as you like

 

I used RhymeZone.com yet again to get ideas as to viable rhymes.

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