I describe my ongoing lyrics writing projects. Where I get my ideas, how I match my words with other people's music, which little helpers I use...
the 'story' so far:
walk in the light - or - dance in the light
two and a half verses for "walk in the light"
I don't walk in the light any longer but I stand in the light. That seems to me to make more sense. And I decided to title the song "I dance in the light" because that line actually is the hook line, and it is the stronger line.
I also changed the third line in the seconde verse to:
"the voices of birds, ringing and clear"
so I have an acoustic 'image' that seems more coherent after "an abundance of sounds to please my ears". Now the first verse refers to optic impressions whereas the second verse refers to acoustic ones.
I dance in the light. No kidding, I do ;-)
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