I describe my ongoing lyrics writing projects. Where I get my ideas, how I match my words with other people's music, which little helpers I use...
I did the 'meter-check' and decided that I can leave the lyrics as they are. Just one miniature twist:
I just point out | what is obvious ["is" instead of just "'s" gains me an additional syllabe that makes this line fit better]
I also observed that
"see things with sober eyes" might be a tongue twister, that will depend on how fast the tune is.
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