heap of misery

This is actually another "lyric in progress" as it is not already finished. The text has been lyring around since a couple of weeks:

VERSE
you don't look | that great today
with your hangover grumpy mood
better get | close to the toilet bowl
in case you're goin' to puke

you hair | is in a mess today
you truly look like shit
I just point out | what is obvious
no need to throw a fit

PRE
you say  | that you enjoy your life
you say | you need some fun each night
looks to me | like you get drunk each night
while you're running  | into your own knife [stress on "your"]

CH
if you ask me
all I can see
is you've reduced yourself
to a heap of misery
if you ask me
...

The pipe symbols indicate where I expect a natural break in the melody:

you don't look

that great today

you hair

is in a mess today

etcetera.