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I describe my ongoing lyrics writing projects. Where I get my ideas, how I match my words with other people's music, which little helpers I use...

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do not hold back - finished

The verses:

 

she's the girl that goes under your skin
she's the price you would like to win
she's the girl right out of your dream
but
you won't get her holding on to another Jim Beam
sitting around like you're paralyzed
demoralized
oh no-ho

 

... and:

 

she's the girl that makes your heart pound
she's your princess as yet still uncrowned
she's the girl you've been hoping for
but
you won't get her if you do not come out some more
sitting around like you're paralyzed
demoralized
oh no-ho

 

Via Rhymezone I accessed OneLook ( a web dictionary) to find "demoralized". I altered the second verse, too, because the line "her voice the most beautiful sound" did not really match the intonation.

 

I also worked on the chorus a little more. The chorus has two parts, or rather variants. After the second verse only the second part or variant is used. That's why I placed the title/hook there so it's repeated three times in the song:

 

open up
and
don't worry, your chance is there
take the risk
and
just give your best, and beat your scare
give it all
and do not _ refuse the dare
show your loving

show your love
and
don't worry, you'll get the knack
take the risk
and
just give your best, do not hold back
give it all
and don't worry, you will not crack
but do not hold back

 

You'll find the complete lyrics on my Lyrics Pages.

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