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15. Januar 2011 6 15 /01 /Januar /2011 16:11

Just two lines - the chorus:

 

we are dancing in the rain while others run - away

we are dancing in the rain to call the sun - again

 

I wrote the second line first and checked rhymes for 'sun': fun, run, none, done, one, won...

Not the greatest lyrics ever written, are they? Jen's orgininal lines went:

 

and when the rain begins to fall the time has come - again

I will dance between all these raindrops till the sun - will come

 

Even worse and quite a bit 'Denglish' (as we call German English) ;-)

 

Well, it's a dance song and, according to Jen, words don't matter much...

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