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26. August 2011 5 26 /08 /August /2011 16:06

More feedback in the manner "country must be conversational", so here are my suggestions trying to reduce educated lingo: 

 

LIFT:
you may think you can dictate to me
you may think you can lay down the law
you base your views on what's best for you
but your position has got a flaw

VERSE 4:

I saw your dismissive look 

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"Dismissive" fits better than "patronizing" anyway.

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