Lyrics in Progress

I have posted a few of my songs on the unsigned band web site.

Bernd on UBW

I also asked for reviews. Astonishingly, they did not come out as bad as I feared in spite of my rather lacking musical skills and crude arrangements.

Spartacus:

warm voice , i like the vocal mastering it is original, guitar sing well too, outro is excellent but song is short

Sounds like a demo by Roger Waters, which is good or bad depending on what you think of Roger Waters....


Cathedral:

I really enjoyed this piece of yours. It’s...well...different. Very innovative songwriting. I’m not sure about the marketability but it really does show how talented you are.

Bernd - I listened to this song several days ago and it’s stayed on my mind ever since...
The thematic vehicle that you’ve hatched here is brilliant and I love the way that you just hop in it and drive around...
The instrumental changes between chorus and verse serve to illustrate the point of your lyric in ways that go far beyond what the words themselves could ever achieve - the effect that you engineered that way is sheer brilliance.
Good work on this one, Bernd - I’m very glad that you shared it.

That was an interesting piece. It is a bit different from the norm. I’ll be listening to it again. Good job.

Hello Bernd,
I’ve just got around to listening to this and really liked it - it has something about it that I really like, but I can’t put my finger on it yet!  I’ll have to have another listen when I’ve got a bit more time (things are a bit busy here at the moment).
Nice one


Terminal disease:

the music is nice i like it...sounds like 80's well formatted...rock for sure

With a stronger voice and a few musical alterations, the formatting of this song could make it a hit