3. Juni 2009
3
03
/06
/Juni
/2009
11:59
a minor change so the verses rhyme:
we order a drink
and we drink to the past
we drink to a future
still in doubt
instead of:
we drink to the future
and the night
The verse now rhymes with the last line of:
the conversation runs dry
but our silence still talks
so many topics
we'd been talking about
I only had 3 notes in the first verse to squeeze some meaning into, you see. Still, I actually like both versions, the new, thoughtful one as well as the slightly ambiguous one.
we order a drink
and we drink to the past
we drink to a future
still in doubt
instead of:
we drink to the future
and the night
The verse now rhymes with the last line of:
the conversation runs dry
but our silence still talks
so many topics
we'd been talking about
I only had 3 notes in the first verse to squeeze some meaning into, you see. Still, I actually like both versions, the new, thoughtful one as well as the slightly ambiguous one.
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