I describe my ongoing lyrics writing projects. Where I get my ideas, how I match my words with other people's music, which little helpers I use...
Don't worry if you can't recall having read about "like 'em bad" - I didn't post it here. It was just one more of my quick shots with no 'educational' aspects to it. But now that Robert suggested two improvements I might just as well tell you about them.
Two original lines went:
girl, I fancy you
make my dreams come true
Robert suggested to change the first line to:
girl I crave for you
...
Yep, that's stronger, i.e. better!
The chorus went:
let’s get cozy
let’s get wild
be my slut
be my spoilt child
Mmh, I like ‘em bad
Now it goes:
let’s get cozy
let’s get wild
one on one
be my spoilt child
Mmh, I like ‘em bad
I'd never have come up with "one on one" by myself although that expression has been used in several songs. It sure adds spice.
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