the love you've found (brainstorming II)

a few additions from my side after listening to the music again:

Verse 1:

why
should they care
and claim that he/she is the wrong one for you

Well, I just added the optional "he" instead of just "she". This is actually one of my very few lyrics that could work for a female voice just as well as for males.

I forgot a few lines in the chorus and "tweaked" one line:

yeah, you'll keep your head up high and stand your ground
you'll always stay true to the love you've found
keep your head up high
stand your ground
staying true
to the love you've found
the love you've found

That's it so far. Now I'm waiting for the other Bernd's feedback. Maybe the song has got a little too short so he might wish to add a lift (pre-chorus) before the second chorus or a bridge so the chorus can be repeated a third time.