I describe my ongoing lyrics writing projects. Where I get my ideas, how I match my words with other people's music, which little helpers I use...
I edited the second verse to reduce the number of repeated 'you know - I knows', and also make the verse more similar to verse one:
you know
I wasn't true to you
it's true
that others shared my bed
I know
what you had to go through
so you
had rather I'd dropped dead
[doesn't matter much if it will sound like "you'd rather I dropped dead", but semantically the past makes more sense, so in the lyrics it should be past: "you had rather I had dropped dead - yet I am still breathing"]
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