I describe my ongoing lyrics writing projects. Where I get my ideas, how I match my words with other people's music, which little helpers I use...
Don't look for "pay them back I", it's Got no ideas? Just read some book, actually.
A friend from a songwriting board suggested to replace the line "dumped over your village" with "hanging over your village", so verse one now reads:
yellow rain
and a lethal gas cloud
hanging over your village
wiping it out
I think, that "hanging over the village" does indeed convey the threatening atmosphere better. Thanks to Dan!
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