Before uploading my 2009 lyrics collection to the Internet Archive I decided to proof read the former version. A friend of mine had called attention to a few rather embarrassing mistakes ("live" instead of "life", "presence" instead of "present"...), others I noted myself ("dead" instead of "death" so it would rhyme with "bed"...). There will be more errors I've not yet spotted, but I did my best to lower the embarrassment factor from, say, 7 to, say, 3.
I also renamed "virtual life" to "virtual world" so the hook stands out a bit more.
If you want to achieve the cleaned up version, it's on the Internet Archive
And stay tuned for the next compilation containing 13 new songs that's due in a few days.