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I describe my ongoing lyrics writing projects. Where I get my ideas, how I match my words with other people's music, which little helpers I use...

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Joy - II

I've completed the second verse:

 

Hey Joy, please stay awhile
you put a smile upon my face
you're always carefree as a kid
you make my life gather pace

 

First I had "... make me feel carefree as a kid" but I like the second version better that keeps up the ambiguity of the text: "joy" as joy versus "Joy" as a person's name.

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