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I describe my ongoing lyrics writing projects. Where I get my ideas, how I match my words with other people's music, which little helpers I use...

human condition - III

I rewrote the first verse:

 

she was 22
consumed by lung cancer
she'd never smoked a cigarette
she saw all her friends
to say her Good-Byes
she said we must not be upset

 

Should run a little smoother. And I never cared for the former last line - "said there was nothing she'd regret", it didn't make sense (that could be something old people say when they die).

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