garden of bliss - for Svein

Using my dummy text for the chorus as a template I wrote a new chorus:

and now I
am standing in the rain
and feel blessed with my garden of bliss
like my plants
I revel in the rain
I dance, and I marvel at this
place of rest
isle of love
my world of bliss

As you see, I actually kept words and phrases from my dummy text.

I also listened to Svein's tune for the verses a few times and noted yet another dummy text. Don't worry if it reads real stupid - it's only for the meter:

and I walk through the roses

and I walk through the garden

and I'm gone

I talk to the flowers

and I walk through the garden

and I'm gone

yeah, I'm gone

I'm really gone

oh yes, I'm gone

Each second verse differs slightly from the first, so here the last three lines go:

oh yes, I'm gone

I am gone

I'm really gone

I intend to do some kind of 'garden song', as you can see. So I checked for names of flowers and their symbolic meaning. I'll post my finding in a seperate blog entry instantly.