farewell (completed?)

I hope I'll remember the tune I had in my mind for the bridge that I've added today. Anyway, here are the lyrics:

the shadows grow longer
the sun's on the decline
the sky will be burning
and the Gods will resign
I am so tired now
but I'm still feeling fine

so, farewell
farewell, you loved ones
keep my memory
farewell,
farewell my lover
and think kindly of me

and I gather my friends
reach for my wife's hand
the time that we've shared
's been incredibly grand
my long years' companions
everything has to end

so, farewell
farewell, you loved ones
keep my memory
farewell,
farewell my lover
and think kindly of me

and I'll move towards the light
'cause I have ceased to fight
since quite a while
and if you note my smile
you will know that I am glad
'cause I have had
the best of times one could expect
'cause I've known you

so, farewell
farewell, you loved ones
keep my memory
farewell,
farewell my lover
and think kindly of me