I describe my ongoing lyrics writing projects. Where I get my ideas, how I match my words with other people's music, which little helpers I use...
I had posted "Beco" on several discussion boards. Although there were very few reactions, there was one particular remark that helped me improve the chorus.
risks are taken
all limits broken
breaking loose
tires lose their grip
a wall is hit
this is bad news
Someone noted that the expression "a wall is hit" focuses on the wall instead of the driver. Now it reads:
...
one loses control
his car hits the wall
...
Much better!
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