another text for Karsten

Here's another text I've written for Karsten. It matches the syllable count but I haven't checked the intonation yet. I may have to rewrite parts of it.

The structure of the song is: Verse Chorus Verse Chorus Bridge Chorus Chorus

Verse

I still don't know what I've done wrong
what was the reason you'd got cross with me
what is it that we can't get along
don't turn you back on me, don't turn a deaf ear to my plea

Chorus

why do you treat me like this
you are breaking my heart
what did I do, what went amiss
what's driving us apart


Verse
gone are the times when we'd hold hands
when I enjoyed the sparkling in your eyes
the time for exploring foreign lands
I am left with the void, left alone with my unheard cries

Chorus

why do you treat me like this
you are breaking my heart
what did I do, what went amiss
what's driving us apart

Bridge

instead of reaching for the skies
I am left with the void, left alone with my unheard cries

Chorus

why do you treat me like this
you are breaking my heart
what did I do, what went amiss
what's driving us apart

why do you treat me like this
you are breaking my heart
dispelled from the island of bliss
our love fallen apart