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11. April 2014 5 11 /04 /April /2014 15:57

"Watch out" is the - maybe provisional - title that I have given my lyrics. I scrapped the "mad storm", replacing it with "watch out", an expression I could also use in other places where only two syllables were required. After Stasy in principal signalled consent with my concept I added another verse:

 

no excuse
nothings's left
once we've drained our cup


left alone
on our own
close to giving up

 

The chorus is varied towards the end, so I wrote another part, thereby 'rescuing' the 'flood' that I had scrapped before:

 

Oh
a flood will rise
and wash away our delusions, wipe out our mem'ries

 

That's it (I think). I will post the complete text on my home page.

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