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9. April 2014 3 09 /04 /April /2014 16:51

In the part that I called 'chorus' before there is a distinct increase of tension over the first two lines. That's why I consider this short part a 'lift' now. It brought up the image of a gathering storm so I came up with these lines for the chorus:

 

VERSE ...

 

LIFT ...

 

CHORUS:

a storm will rage
the oceans roar
until the past is washed away

a flood will rise
the rain will pour
to clean the times for a new day

 

 

Listening into the music again I found that there are only two notes/syllables in the first line of the second part, so maybe I'll make it:

 

a storm will rage
the oceans roar
until the past is washed away

 

mad storm

the rain will pour
to clean the times for a new day

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